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You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

Dear sir/madam, I hope this letter finds you well. My name is Kashif & I have a contract with you from the last eight months of an apartment Address is 2nd floor, legacy tower, Brampton. Actually, I was moved here due to my job posting at my current location. Now the company transferred me to another city which is far away from this and has to join my new assignment as early as possible. So due to the above mentioned reason I can't continue the contract that was done for a year as I need to move within a short time and take over the new responsibilities given by the company. it is requested please do the adjustment of my advance payment that was given to you at the time of contract and pay me through my bank account mentioned below. Your early response will be highly appreciated Your faithfully, Kashif
Dear sir/madam,

I hope this letter finds you well. My name is
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Kashif
& I have a contract with you from the last eight months of an apartment Address is 2nd floor, legacy tower, Brampton.

Actually, I was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
moved
here due to my job posting at my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
location.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Now
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
transferred me to another city which is far away from this and
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has to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
join
my new assignment as early as possible.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
due to the above mentioned reason I can't continue the contract that
was done
for a year as I need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
move
within a short time and take over the new responsibilities
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
.
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it
is requested
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please
do the adjustment of my advance payment that was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
to you at the time of contract and pay me through my bank account mentioned below.

Your early response will be
highly
appreciated

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)
Your
faithfully
,

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Kashif

IELTS letter You are renting a flat from an agency. Your contract was for one year but you need to leave the flat two months early. Write a letter to the agency. In your letter introduce yourself ask to leave the flat before the contract finishes explain why you need to break the contract.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
150 words
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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