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Dear moderators, Could you please help me with your feedback- Marriam Zakri Ajeesh S You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter. 1. expalin why you think you would be suitable for the job 2. say what else you could do for the family 3.give your reasons for wanting the job. Dear Sir or Madam, Hope you are doing well and you are safe.

Dear Sir or Madam, Hope you are doing well and you are safe. My name is Kushal and I am from India. This is regarding your advertisement in a magazine for the post of a language teacher. I am writing to you because I would like to be considered for this position. I am a qualified professional teacher in Hindi and I have been teaching Hindi since last 20 years. I am a very caring, friendly and teaching Hindi is my passion. Currently, I am providing private classes to 2 Russian families based in India. Besides this, I have done certification in yoga which is one of my favourite leisure activities and I would love to arrange yoga classes for your whole family during my spare time. Besides, I am very good at sports, particularly in tennis and would love to take part with your kids. If I am given a chance, it would be a great opportunity for me to explore the beautiful landscape and countryside which will assist me to get the vital knowledge about your local culture. Furthermore, the important foreign work experience will help in my career growth and will improve the chances of getting a good job in India. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my letter, please do let me know if you need any further information or clarification. Yours faithfully, Kushal Rana
Dear Sir or Madam,

Hope you are doing well and you are safe.

My name is
Kushal
and I am from India. This is regarding your advertisement in a magazine for the post of a language teacher. I am writing to you
because
I would like to
be considered
for this position.

I am a qualified professional teacher in Hindi and I have been teaching Hindi since last 20 years.
I
am a
very
caring, friendly and teaching Hindi is my passion.
Currently
, I am providing private classes to 2 Russian families based in India.

Besides
this, I have done certification in yoga which is one of my
favourite
leisure activities and I would
love
to arrange yoga classes for your whole family during my spare time.
Besides
, I am
very
good
at sports,
particularly
in tennis and would
love
to
take part
with your kids.

If I am
given
a chance, it would be a great opportunity for me to explore the
beautiful
landscape and countryside which will assist me to
get
the vital knowledge about your local culture.
Furthermore
, the
important
foreign work experience will
help
in my career growth and will
improve
the chances of getting a
good
job in India.

Thank you
so
much for taking the time to read my letter,
please
do
let
me know if you need any
further
information or clarification.

Yours
faithfully
,

Kushal
Rana
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IELTS letter Dear moderators, Could you please help me with your feedback- Marriam Zakri Ajeesh S You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter. 1. expalin why you think you would be suitable for the job 2. say what else you could do for the family 3. give your reasons for wanting the job. Dear Sir or Madam, Hope you are doing well and you are safe.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
232 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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