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You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: • explain how you knew about the plans. • Describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood. • Suggest a possible solution to the problem.

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter with regards to the recent announcement which Government of India has made in the last month regarding an Airport construction in Whitefield area near to my house. The airport is planned to be constructed on a dump site which was not in use from the last 10 years. The construction of this airport will provide a good connectivity to commuters with the rest of country and can save a lot of travel time, but there are some drawbacks as well which cannot be ignored. Late night Flights will disturb the daily routine of all the nearby residentials and may effect their health to a great extent. But the effect could be more for pupils and animals as well. In addition there could be a traffic congestion problem as well as the city toll is very nearby and hence people can miss their flights. In my perspective, there could be a one solution which can be implemented to deal with the above negative impacts. Instead of constructing a runway towards Indiranagar, which is next to Whitefield, we can think of shifting it towards MG road which is full of commercial complexes. In this way, we will have a very little noise from Airport during landing & takeoffs which is helpful for all the residents living in Whitefield. Moreover, the traffic should also be diverted and divided in between the two areas. Kindly review this and let me know if you need additional information. Yours sincerely, Mike
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter
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with regards to
the recent announcement which
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Government
of India has made in the last month regarding an
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Airport
construction in Whitefield area near to my
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house
. The
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airport
is planned
to
be constructed
on a dump site which was not in
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use
from the last 10 years.

The construction of this
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airport
will provide a
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good
connectivity to commuters with the rest of country and can save
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a lot of
travel time,
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but
there are
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some
drawbacks
as well
which cannot be
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ignored
. Late night Flights will disturb the daily routine of all the nearby
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residentials
and may
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effect
their health to a great extent.
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But
the effect could be more for pupils and animals
as well
. In
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addition
there could be a traffic congestion problem
as well
as the city toll is
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very
nearby and
hence
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people
can miss their flights.

In my perspective, there could be a one solution which can
be implemented
to deal with the above
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negative
impacts.
Instead
of constructing a runway towards
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Indiranagar
, which is
next
to Whitefield, we can
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think
of shifting it towards MG road which is full of commercial complexes. In this way, we will have a
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very
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little
noise from
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Airport
during landing & takeoffs which is helpful for all the residents living in Whitefield.
Moreover
, the traffic should
also
be diverted
and divided in between the two areas. Kindly review this and
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let
me know if you need additional information.

Yours
sincerely
,

Mike
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IELTS letter You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell: • explain how you knew about the plans. • Describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood. • Suggest a possible solution to the problem.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
251 words
6.0
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