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letter to the college enrolment officer

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writting to express my interest in the comuter class provided by your institution. I've always been found in computers since I was a child. I hope you will consider my situation favorably. let me explain my situation. Although I haven't taken the prerequisite for the course, I believe with hardwork and dedication I can overcome the obsticle of having a fewer khnowledge. Furthermore, I am a fast learner and I make up for the gap in information by going the extra mile and putting substantial effort in studying. Adding my passion for computers in the mix gives me the motivation to procede. Would you kindly consider enrolling me in the course? I khnow it's difficult to make an exeption for me, but please give me a chance and I want dissapointe you. I don't mind online or in person classes as long as I could get in. I am looking forwarard to hearing from you. Thank you for your consideration Yours faithfully, Rafic
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am
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writting
to express my interest in the
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comuter
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class
provided by your institution. I've always
been found
in computers since I was a child.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
hope you will consider my situation
favorably
.

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let
me
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explain
my situation. Although I haven't taken the prerequisite for the course, I believe with
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hardwork
and dedication I can overcome the
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obsticle
of having a fewer
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khnowledge
.
Furthermore
, I am a
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fast
learner and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
up for the gap in information by going the extra mile and putting substantial effort in studying. Adding my passion for computers in the mix gives me the motivation to
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procede
.

Would you kindly consider enrolling me in the course? I
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khnow
it's difficult to
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make
an
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exeption
for me,
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but
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please
give me a chance and I want
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dissapointe
you. I don't mind online or in person classes as long as I could
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get
in.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking
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forwarard
to hearing from you.

Thank you for your consideration

Yours
faithfully
,

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Rafic

IELTS letter letter to the college enrolment officer

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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