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You are relocating to a new city. Write a letter to an agent to arrange a house for you and your family. In your letter, you should tell: • When you will relocate • why you relocate • What kind of house you want.

Dear Mr Manish, I am writing to you to help me to find me a suitable apartment in Kolkata as I am moving here next month with my family. I am Amandeep from Chandigarh working in TC Global. Due to my transfer to Kolkata I have to relocate, I will be arriving in the city on 26th of February need apartment for a period of one year. As I am moving here with my family I need 3 bedroom apartment with kitchen and a living area preferably on the ground floor as my kids are young I would really satisfied if the area has playground and school in the locality and also I want the apartment to be fully furnished. I am ready to pay between Rs 25, 000 to Rs 30, 000 per month. You can contact me on 988888888 to discuss more about it. Looking forward to your prompt response. Yours Sincerely Xyz

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I am writing to you to In informal texts, ‘to’ is not necessary. Do you mean “help me find”?help me find
help me to find
 me a suitable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 in Kolkata as I am moving here next
 month with my family. I am Amandeep from Chandigarh working in TC Global.

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have to
 relocate, I will be arriving in the city on 26th of February need You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 for a period of one year.

As I am moving here with my family I need It appears that a hyphen is missing.3-bedroom
3 bedroom
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 with kitchen and a living area preferably
 on the This word is British English. Did you mean “first floor”?first floor
ground floor
 as my kids are young I would really
The modal verb ‘would’ requires the verb’s base form.satisfy
satisfied
 if the area has playground and school in the locality and also
 I want the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 to be fully
 furnished. I am ready to pay between Rs 25, 000 to Rs 30, 000 per month.

You can contact me on 988888888 to discuss more about it.

Looking forward to your prompt response.

Yours Sincerely


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