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Dear Sir/Madam, I am Prof. John from Canterbury in Kent, UK, writing to inform you that we are arranging a trip for our students to visit the Black Mountains in West Wales. We would like to accommodate your Hotel: The Royal Palace in West Wales. This is going to be a long trip we are Planning in April 2020 with a group of 20 students, and 5 professors accompanying them on this tour. With that being said, our students along with other professors will be visiting your Hotel on April 10, 2020 Morning at 8 AM. Since it is the first time for the students to participate in this trip which is planned outside the City, we are expecting a wonderful service from your Hotel. The Students are Supposed to visit the Black mountains on April 10th at 10: 00 AM and will be spending some good time until that evening. We would like to reserve the rooms for all the 20 students along with the 5 professors who are planned to stay for 10 days. We are glad to book our reservation with your well-reputed hotel and would like to mention that we would need Individual or dual sharing rooms for the Students and well-maintained single rooms for the Professors, provided with Breakfast and dinner for all of them. Request you to acknowledge this letter and provide your confirmation on the booking. Yours faithfully, John
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am Prof. John from Canterbury in Kent, UK, writing to inform you that we are arranging a trip for our
students
to visit the Black Mountains in West Wales. We would like to accommodate your
Hotel
: The Royal Palace in West Wales. This is going to be a long trip we are Planning in April 2020 with a group of 20
students
, and 5
professors
accompanying them on this tour.

With that
being said
, our
students
along with other
professors
will be visiting your
Hotel
on April 10,
2020
Morning at 8 AM. Since it is the
first
time for the
students
to participate in this trip which
is planned
outside the City, we are expecting a wonderful service from your
Hotel
. The
Students
are Supposed
to visit the Black mountains on April 10th at 10: 00 AM and will be spending
some
good
time until that evening.

We would like to reserve the rooms for all the 20
students
along with the 5
professors
who
are planned
to stay for 10 days.

We are glad to book our reservation with your well-reputed
hotel
and would like to mention that we would need Individual or dual sharing rooms for the
Students
and well-maintained single rooms for the
Professors
, provided with Breakfast and dinner for all of them. Request you to acknowledge this letter and provide your confirmation on the booking.

Yours
faithfully
,

John
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IELTS letter formal general letter writing

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
235 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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