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The goods arrive in demaged condition

The goods arrive in demaged condition 3aQMn
Dear Sir/MadamI am writing a complaint about the goods which arrive demaged condition. I ordered Smartphone and earphone from The Aliexpress on September 4 th. A few weeks later after that day the goods arrived to my address. Unfortunately, I opened the box of item. I saw it damaged condition, the telephon's touch screen was broken as well as There are not any earphone in it. I was very shocked such a situation. Then I had to open dispute. However, the price of products are very expensive as well as it was demaged. I ask you send another one or take back full refund for the item. I took photo of the smartphone and I will send you. If you find resolution for my problem I will greatful from you. I hope you will able to find a way which can salute it. I look forward to hearing from you good resolution. Yours faithfully Larry Dunman
Dear Sir/
MadamI
am
writing a complaint about the
goods
which arrive
demaged
condition. I ordered Smartphone and earphone from The
Aliexpress
on September
4 th
. A few weeks later after that day the
goods
arrived to my address. Unfortunately, I opened the box of item. I
saw
it damaged condition, the
telephon
's touch screen
was broken
as well
as There are not any earphone in it. I was
very
shocked such a situation. Then I had to open dispute.
However
, the price of products are
very
expensive
as well
as it was
demaged
. I ask you
send
another one or take back full refund for the item. I took photo of the smartphone and I will
send
you. If you find resolution for my problem I will
greatful
from you. I hope you
will able
to find a way which can salute it. I look forward to hearing from you
good
resolution. Yours
faithfully
Larry
Dunman
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IELTS letter The goods arrive in demaged condition

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
5.5
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