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Write a letter to a friend about a job offer he got from city he lives

Write a letter to a friend about a job offer he got from city he lives rKoYl

Dear Adam, Hope you are doing well. I'm glad to let you know that I've received an job offer from Uber and my work location is Manchester City. While I'm excited in joining the company, but I'm equally worried about the city life. As you might be knowing I've spend all my years back in my village and I rarely go out of my town. So I don't know much about the urban life and its culture. So I'm bit nervous if i will be able to adapt the urban way of of living. Moreover, I don't have any relatives or friends apart from you living in town. Hence I would be needing your advice, in how you managed this situation while you relocated to the city. Any help in this matter will do much good for me. Apart from this, as i not familar with the streets, i would need your help to find a good accomodation nearer to my organisation, so that I can walk to work. This will also help me to save the travelling expense as well. Last, sorry, to bother you with all my concerns. I'll be looking forward for your response. I hope to meet you soon. Best Regards Pradhun

Dear Adam,

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let
 you know that I've received Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 job offer from Uber and my work location is Manchester City.

While I'm excited in joining the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
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but
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be knowing
Did you mean "I've spent"?I've spent
I've spend
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I rarely go out of my town. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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bit
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Moreover
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Hence
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be needing
 your advice, in how you managed this situation

while you relocated to the city. Any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 in this matter will do much This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
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 for me.

Apart from this, as i not Possible spelling mistake found.familiar
familar
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 would need your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 to find a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
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accomodation
 nearer to my Possible spelling mistake. 'organisation' is British English.organization
organisation
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that I can walk to work.

This will also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me to save the travelling expense as well
.

Last, sorry, to bother you with all my concerns. I'll be looking forward for your response.

I hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Best Regards

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