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You are professional and you are planning to work abroad. You have come across an employment agency on the internet that hires people from your country to send to other countries. Write a letter to agency. In your letter Write reasons why you want to work abroad Describe what kind of company or organisation you want to work with State your expectations from the job.

You are professional and you are planning to work abroad. You have come across an employment agency on the internet that hires people from your country to send to other countries. Write a letter to agency. In your letter Write reasons why you want to work abroad Describe what kind of company or organisation you want to work with State your expectations from the job. mXEbO
Dear sir, My name is Tushal Patel and I have completed my master degree in commerce. I had read your advertisement recently on internet. Moreover, I would like to work in a foreign country mainly for two reason. First good salary I will get if I work in abroad. Second one is good experience working in a different arrangement help me to gain some new skills and ameliorate my knowledge. Furthermore, i would like to work in a multinational company as I have master degree with major in human resource management and also I have subjects like economics which will be additional advantage for my profile. However, I don’t have to much expectation from the job except pay according to the position and happy to take extra responsibility for position. Main point is provide an accommodation for 1 month until I Rent my own house. Looking forward to hear from you about my CV. Yours sincerely, Tushal Patel Dear sir, My name is Tushal Patel and I have completed my master degree in commerce. I had read your advertisement recently on internet. Moreover, I would like to work in a foreign country mainly for two reason. First good salary I will get if I work in abroad. Second one is good experience working in a different arrangement help me to gain some new skills and ameliorate my knowledge. Furthermore, i would like to work in a multinational company as I have master degree with major in human resource management and also I have subjects like economics which will be additional advantage for my profile. However, I don’t have to much expectation from the job except pay according to the position and happy to take extra responsibility for position. Main point is provide an accommodation for 1 month until I Rent my own house. Looking forward to hear from you about my CV. Yours sincerely, Tushal Patel
Dear sir,

My name is
Possible spelling mistake found.
Tushal
Patel and I have completed my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
master
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
in commerce. I had read your advertisement recently on internet.
Moreover
, I would like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in a foreign country
mainly
for two reason.
First
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
salary I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
if I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in abroad. Second one is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
experience working in a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
arrangement
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to gain
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and ameliorate my knowledge.

Furthermore
,
Did you mean "I"?
i
would like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in a multinational
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
as I have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
master
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
with major in human resource management and
also
I have subjects like economics which will be additional advantage for my profile.

However
, I don’t have
Did you mean "too"?
to
much expectation from the job except pay according to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
position
and happy to take extra responsibility for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
position
. Main point is
Consider using a past participle here: "provided".
provide
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "accommodation".
an accommodation
for 1 month until I Rent my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you about my CV.

Yours
sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Tushal
Patel

Dear sir,

My name is
Possible spelling mistake found.
Tushal
Patel and I have completed my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
master
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
in commerce. I had read your advertisement recently on internet.
Moreover
, I would like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in a foreign country
mainly
for two reason.
First
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
salary I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
if I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in abroad. Second one is
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
good
experience working in a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
arrangement
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me to gain
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and ameliorate my knowledge.

Furthermore
,
Did you mean "I"?
i
would like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in a multinational
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
as I have
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
master
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
degree
with major in human resource management and
also
I have subjects like economics which will be additional advantage for my profile.

However
, I don’t have
Did you mean "too"?
to
much expectation from the job except pay according to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
position
and happy to take extra responsibility for
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
position
. Main point is
Consider using a past participle here: "provided".
provide
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "accommodation".
an accommodation
for 1 month until I Rent my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.

Looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you about my CV.

Yours
sincerely
,

Possible spelling mistake found.
Tushal
Patel
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IELTS letter You are professional and you are planning to work abroad. You have come across an employment agency on the internet that hires people from your country to send to other countries. Write a letter to agency. In your letter Write reasons why you want to work abroad Describe what kind of company or organisation you want to work with State your expectations from the job.

Letter
  American English
14 paragraphs
315 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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