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PROPOSAL LETTER APPLICATION

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Hello, Ladies and Gentlemen! . My name is Madina. I am the head of the Language Centre "High Five” in Semey. I would like to inform you of my intent to work with you. For several years I have been teaching all level English. I prepared students for the IELTS at different organizations. My students’ highest score was 7. 5. Some students have potential to get 8. At the moment I am managing language center in Semey. “High Five” is small but rapidly growing center in Semey. The interest in studying in my center is rising from day to day. It has keen interest in sharing qualitative knowledge in short period of time, basically focusing speaking as it is the hardest skill to acquire in non-speaking environment. In Semey many students are willing to pass their IELTS, but not all of them can afford it. Opening one more centre in Semey allow them to safe a fortune as they will not waste time on accommodation and meal. Many students are showing better results in paper comparing with computer -based IELTS. Due to this reason I am tracking the idea of opening an exam center on behalf of your organization in Semey. . I would like to know how our organizations could collaborate on this issue and I have some questions on this: . What facilities should my office have? . Are there any requirements like students number and class facilities? . If you have any question I am ready to answer. My contact information is noted below. . I look forward to any kind of partnership form with you as I see potential for synergy are thus great. .

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