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TALK ABOUT THE ADVANTAGE AND DISADVANTAGE OF EACH TYPE OF FAMILY

TALK ABOUT THE ADVANTAGE AND DISADVANTAGE OF EACH TYPE OF FAMILY E7obx
hello, I'm Trinh. I live in a nuclear family consisting of only my parents, me and my sister. And I'm happy with my little family. Firstly, I find living in a nuclear family more comfortable than living in a multigenerational family because it doesn't have many rules. Thus, my family rarely has unnecessary quarrels. Second, my parents are quite easygoing. They often advise us, but that does not mean that they impose their thoughts on us. Therefore, the generation gap is not too influential. And what I like most about living in a nuclear family is that I have my own room, it makes me feel like I have privacy and I feel comfortable decorating the room according to my preferences. However, my relatives are quite far away from us, and it takes a while for my whole family to see them, which makes me wish I could live with them.
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in a nuclear
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my parents, me and my sister. And I'm happy with my
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Firstly
, I find living in a nuclear
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more comfortable than living in a multigenerational
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it doesn't have
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rules
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Thus
, my
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rarely has unnecessary quarrels. Second, my parents are quite easygoing. They
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often
advise us,
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that does not mean that they impose their thoughts on us.
Therefore
, the generation gap is not too influential. And what I like most about living in a nuclear
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family
is that I have my
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own
room, it
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makes
me feel like I have privacy and I feel comfortable decorating the room according to my preferences.
However
, my relatives are quite far away from us, and it takes a while for my whole
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family
to
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them, which
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me wish I could
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IELTS letter TALK ABOUT THE ADVANTAGE AND DISADVANTAGE OF EACH TYPE OF FAMILY

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  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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