Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

You are planning to visit your friend Robin in Canada.Robin has written to you. Read the letter and the notes you have made.Then write a letter to Robin, using all your notes.

You are planning to visit your friend Robin in Canada. Robin has written to you. Read the letter and the notes you have made. Then write a letter to Robin, using all your notes. xg8kb

Dear Robin It would be ample to meet you and to spend some time with you at the sports camp. I really like sports camps because love competing, especially activities are extremely and fun, also I like chatting together. In general, I love all activities thar you adverted. Anyway I am really interested in swimming. I hope there will be good pool. If you allow me to choose, I would prefer to stay in a room, because I really afraid of insects. However I have never stayed in a tent. Of course, I could cook some typical Karakalpak food like five fingers. It’s very tasty and I hope you would love all it. I would like to come before that sports camp and see sights of your city. I really enjoy observing historical places in my country with my friends, and I would like to experience how young people have fun in you country as well. BEST REGARDS Katya.

Dear Robin

It would be ample to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you and to spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time with you at the sports camp. I You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheasilycertainlyabsolutelyindeedwellactually
really
 like sports camps This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 competing, especially
 activities are extremely
 and fun, also
 I like chatting together. In general
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 all Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "activities'" or "activity's"?activities'activity's
activities
Possible spelling mistake found.theirTharthattheythanThai
thar
 you adverted. Anyway I am You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheasilycertainlyabsolutelyindeedwellactually
really
 interested in swimming. I hope there will be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 pool. If you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to choose, I would prefer to stay in a room, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheasilycertainlyabsolutelyindeedwellactually
really
 afraid of insects. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 I have never stayed in a tent.

Of course
, I could cook This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 typical Possible spelling mistake found.
Karakalpak
 food like five fingers. It’s This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 tasty and I hope you would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 all it.

I would like to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 that sports camp and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 sights of your city. I You use this word too often, consider replacing it witheasilycertainlyabsolutelyindeedwellactually
really
 enjoy observing historical places in my country with my friends, and I would like to experience how young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have fun in you country as well
.

BEST REGARDS

Katya. 