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You are planning to visit your friend Robin in Canada.Robin has written to you. Read the letter and the notes you have made.Then write a letter to Robin, using all your notes.

You are planning to visit your friend Robin in Canada. Robin has written to you. Read the letter and the notes you have made. Then write a letter to Robin, using all your notes. xg8kb
Dear Robin It would be ample to meet you and to spend some time with you at the sports camp. I really like sports camps because love competing, especially activities are extremely and fun, also I like chatting together. In general, I love all activities thar you adverted. Anyway I am really interested in swimming. I hope there will be good pool. If you allow me to choose, I would prefer to stay in a room, because I really afraid of insects. However I have never stayed in a tent. Of course, I could cook some typical Karakalpak food like five fingers. It’s very tasty and I hope you would love all it. I would like to come before that sports camp and see sights of your city. I really enjoy observing historical places in my country with my friends, and I would like to experience how young people have fun in you country as well. BEST REGARDS Katya.
Dear Robin

It would be ample to
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meet
you and to spend
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some
time with you at the sports camp. I
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really
like sports camps
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because
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love
competing,
especially
activities are
extremely
and fun,
also
I like chatting together.
In general
, I
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love
all
Apostrophe might be missing. Did you mean "activities'" or "activity's"?
activities
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thar
you adverted. Anyway I am
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
interested in swimming. I hope there will be
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good
pool. If you
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allow
me to choose, I would prefer to stay in a room,
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because
I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
afraid of insects.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
However
I have never stayed in a tent.

Of course
, I could cook
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some
typical
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Karakalpak
food like five fingers. It’s
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very
tasty and I hope you would
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love
all it.

I would like to
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come
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before
that sports camp and
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see
sights of your city. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
really
enjoy observing historical places in my country with my friends, and I would like to experience how young
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people
have fun in you country
as well
.

BEST REGARDS

Katya.

IELTS letter You are planning to visit your friend Robin in Canada. Robin has written to you. Read the letter and the notes you have made. Then write a letter to Robin, using all your notes.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
159 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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