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write a letter to the friends inviting them meeting freinds party.

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Dear best friends I am pleased to inform you that you are cardialtyninvited to the meeting friends party. This event will be organized at Zarafshon city in Family Market of the metting freinds party and will be on 1st of June at 13 00 o'clock. A lunch has orranged in between the event to make it more enjoyable Then we would like slight lunch and a sweets. Fristly, my reside in a small then Family Market is 3 floors It has got frist floor is products section. We purchase product and sweets for our children My suggestion there are who has got new a agent write? In addition to this you participate our metting friends party. Please comfirm your availability on or before on Monday by contacting us at 93 315 21 66 or emailing us at zamsidraximov36. com We look forward to your presence on the metting friends party Hopping to meet with all of you at the party. Thanks Oybahor
Dear best
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friends
I am
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to inform you that you are
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cardialtyninvited
to the meeting
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friends
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party
. This
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event
will
be organized
at
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Zarafshon
city in Family Market of the
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metting
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freinds
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party
and will be on 1st of June at 13 00 o'clock. A lunch has
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orranged
in between the
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event
to
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make
it more enjoyable
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Then
we would like slight lunch and
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a sweets
.
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Fristly
, my reside in a
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small
then Family Market is 3 floors It has
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got
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frist
floor is products section. We
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purchase
product and sweets for our children My suggestion there are who has
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got
new
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a
agent write?
In addition
to this you participate our
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metting
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friends
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party
.
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Please
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comfirm
your availability on or
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before
on Monday by contacting us at 93 315 21 66 or emailing us at zamsidraximov36.
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com
We look forward to your presence on the
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metting
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friends
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party
Hopping to
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meet
with all of you at the
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party
. Thanks
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Oybahor
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IELTS letter write a letter to the friends inviting them meeting freinds party.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
161 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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