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Write a letter of invitation to a friend for a special celebration Invite your friend to attend the celebration Discuss the arrangements and plans you have made Offer arrangements for travel and accommodation

Write a letter of invitation to a friend for a special celebration Invite your friend to attend the celebration Discuss the arrangements and plans you have made Offer arrangements for travel and accommodation 6daej
Dear Clara, I hope you are well. It is pleasant to invite you to my mother's birthday party which I am going to organize it on 17th of July. As you know, we have not met for along time so that I do want you to attend in this party. One of my neighbours is helping to buy presents and to make surprise moments for my mom. On the other hand, I really try to organize special decorations, meals, and of course the biggest birthday cake which is my mother has never seen before. I should admit that you may stay with us or any hotel after the party. Please confirm your availability. If you have some questions, do not hesitate to contact me at 5555555555. Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishesYours Jane
Dear Clara, I hope you are well. It is pleasant to invite you to my mother's birthday party which I am going to organize it on 17th of July. As you know, we have not met
Did you mean "for a long time"?
for along time
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so
that I do want you to attend in this party. One of my
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neighbours
is helping to
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buy
presents and to
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make
surprise moments for my mom.
On the other hand
, I
really
try to organize special decorations, meals, and
of course
the biggest birthday cake which is my mother has never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
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before
. I should admit that you may stay with us or any hotel after the party.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
confirm your availability. If you have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
questions, do not hesitate to contact me at 5555555555. Hope to hear from you
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soon
. Best
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wishesYours
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Jane

IELTS letter Write a letter of invitation to a friend for a special celebration Invite your friend to attend the celebration Discuss the arrangements and plans you have made Offer arrangements for travel and accommodation

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  American English
1 paragraphs
134 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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