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Topic: You are a student who lives on campus. Your roommate keeps refusing to tidy the room as assigned though you have constantly reminded her. Write a letter of complaint to the dormitory management board and suggest what should be done.

Topic: You are a student who lives on campus. Your roommate keeps refusing to tidy the room as assigned though you have constantly reminded her. Write a letter of complaint to the dormitory management board and suggest what should be done. LlbXV
Dear Mr. Seward, I am writing to express my extreme dissatisfaction with my roommate because of her untidy life. We are living in room 303 of building B in the dormitory. Firstly, as assigned, every member has to take responsibility for doing household chores. Nevertheless, she almost ignores her duty and refuses to stick to it. Furthermore, she always leaves her personal activity items on the table that she shares with me and even throws them on the floor. Besides, sometimes she does not put the leftover food in the fridge or the garbage bin despite being reminded and received my advice many times, which makes our room smell horrible. Her irresponsibility maddens me, which frequently interrupts me from concentrating on my study and weakens our relationship with roommates. We cannot live in harmony when constantly suffering from negative energies from such an irresponsible individual. As a result, I feel super uncomfortable when I go back to my room, and it also affects my productivity in next day. I have tried to tackle the issue independently; nevertheless, none of my attempts receive positive responses from her. I, therefore, account on the dormitory management board to handle it. To this end, I request that you make a record to remind and warn her. Please face charges to show her the seriousness of the problem should she not obey. I look forward to hearing from you as soon as possible. In the meantime, please feel free to contact me via phone or email if you need further information. Yours sincerely, Pham Huyen 037 683 5628 phuyena10@gmail. com
Dear Mr. Seward,

I am writing to express my extreme dissatisfaction with my roommate
because
of her untidy life. We are living in room 303 of building B in the dormitory.

Firstly
, as assigned, every member
has to
take responsibility for doing household chores.
Nevertheless
, she almost
ignores
her duty and refuses to stick to it.
Furthermore
, she always
leaves
her personal activity items on the table that she shares with me and even throws them on the floor.
Besides
,
sometimes
she does not put the leftover food in the fridge or the garbage bin despite
being reminded
and received my advice
many
times, which
makes
our room smell horrible.

Her irresponsibility maddens me, which
frequently
interrupts me from concentrating on my study and weakens our relationship with roommates. We cannot
live
in harmony when
constantly
suffering from
negative
energies from such an irresponsible individual.
As a result
, I feel super uncomfortable when I go back to my room, and it
also
affects my productivity in
next
day.

I have tried to tackle the issue
independently
;
nevertheless
, none of my attempts receive
positive
responses from her. I,
therefore
, account on the dormitory management board to handle it. To this
end
, I request that you
make
a record to remind and warn her.
Please
face charges to
show
her the seriousness of the problem should she not obey.

I look forward to hearing from you as
soon
as possible. In the meantime,
please
feel free to contact me via phone or email if you need
further
information.

Yours
sincerely
,

Pham
Huyen


037 683 5628

phuyena10@gmail.
com
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IELTS letter Topic: You are a student who lives on campus. Your roommate keeps refusing to tidy the room as assigned though you have constantly reminded her. Write a letter of complaint to the dormitory management board and suggest what should be done.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
264 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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