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I am writing on behalf of the FELTE Youth Council, to request that you be so kind as to assist our project called “Youth Opportunities” with some funding. I would appreciate it if you could fully interest in our meaningful project because this project aims at helping students find work. We hope you carefully consider the fund in a range of $1500. The program is not only for freshmen, but it also extends to other students studying at The University of Languages and International Studies. During the prolonged epidemic COVID-19, students may find it difficult to seek a job for a living, hence our project can provide them with some employment sources both online and offline. We have a system of students who have been working in many different fields in many places from large to small companies. They can give students information about jobs that they want to search for. Besides, the online jobs that we can supply may attract students' attention. The project will cost at least around $3000 but half of that has been committed both by reserve funds and other funding sources we have invited. If you are willing to build equity that is a varied advantage that you can achieve from. The reputation or image of our university will be better known and also be invested by another organization. I look forward to your reply at your soonest convenience. Thank you for your time and cooperation in this matter. Yours faithfully, Nguyen Thanh Thuy Nguyen Thanh Thuy

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