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You are organizing a special party. Invite your friend in your letter write him or her to attend the patry; write arrengments and your plan; accomodation to tavel and stay

You are organizing a special party. Invite your friend in your letter write him or her to attend the patry; write arrengments and your plan; accomodation to tavel and stay xg87a
Dear Clara, Hope you are doing well. It’s been a long time since we last met. Luckily, there is an opportunity now. I am excited to invite you to my father’s sixtieth birthday party that I am going to hold on July 31st. My parents and I’d be very happy if you could make it without fail. We’ve arranged a special pooja on that day at a hill temple in the early morning hours. You know it’s our tradition. After that, a light lunch will be served at my house followed by a grand dinner party. My plan is to give a surprise gift to my father when he cuts the cake. By the way, keep it secret! I will book a taxi to bring you from the airport to my home. As for the accommodation, I will rent a fully furnished apartment close to my house for guests. You can stay either there or at my home. Can’t wait to see you! Best wishes, Anna!
Dear Clara,

Hope you are doing well. It’s been a long time since we last met. Luckily, there is an opportunity
now
. I
am excited
to invite you to my father’s sixtieth birthday party that I am going to hold on July 31st.

My parents and I’d be
very
happy if you could
make
it without fail. We’ve arranged a special
pooja
on that day at a hill temple in the early morning hours. You know it’s our tradition. After that, a light lunch will
be served
at my
house
followed by a grand dinner party. My plan is to give a surprise gift to my father when he
cuts
the cake. By the way,
keep
it secret!

I will book a taxi to bring you from the airport to my home. As for the accommodation, I will rent a
fully
furnished apartment close to my
house
for guests. You can stay either there or at my home.

Can’t wait to
see
you!

Best wishes, Anna!
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IELTS letter You are organizing a special party. Invite your friend in your letter write him or her to attend the patry; write arrengments and your plan; accomodation to tavel and stay

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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