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You are planning to take a vacation . write a letter to a friend. In your letter . describe the vacation spot you have chosen.explain how you plan to spend your time there invite your friend to join you on your vacation .

You are planning to take a vacation. write a letter to a friend. In your letter. describe the vacation spot you have chosen. explain how you plan to spend your time there invite your friend to join you on your vacation. kgOL2
Dear onish I want to tell you about a vacation. which i am planning. I am going to mountain resort because last month i had very hectric schedule. I think lots of places are there for outdoor activities and i hope you can go with me. I plan to go love heart in the Ridgeback mountains. This resort is beautiful location mountain has with spectacular views in all directions. In addition to it hotel has servel restaurant some tennis courts and a small lake. Such has there are lots of fun activities available in the area mountain climbing, parariading and ofcourse i am planning to swin and boat in the lake. I would like to invite you to go to the resort with me. I think you would really enjoy it. I know you love the mountains. Iam planning my vacation for the second half of November and i know you will be free them. Your friend. Soniya
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onish
I want to
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tell
you about a vacation.
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which
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i
am planning. I am going to
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mountain
resort
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because
last month
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i
had
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very
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hectric
schedule. I
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think
lots of places are there for outdoor activities and
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i
hope you can
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go with
me.
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I
plan to go
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love
heart in the
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Ridgeback
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mountains
. This resort is
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beautiful
location
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mountain
has with spectacular views in all directions.
In addition
to
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it hotel
has
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servel
restaurant
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some
tennis courts and a
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small
lake. Such has there
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are
lots of fun activities available in the area
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mountain
climbing,
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parariading
and
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ofcourse
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i
am planning to
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swin
and boat in the lake. I would like to invite you to go to the resort with me. I
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think
you would
really
enjoy it.
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I
know you
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love
the
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mountains
.
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Iam
planning my vacation for the second half of November and
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i
know you will be free them. Your friend.
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Soniya
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IELTS letter You are planning to take a vacation. write a letter to a friend. In your letter. describe the vacation spot you have chosen. explain how you plan to spend your time there invite your friend to join you on your vacation.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
157 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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