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Email from your friend chris

Email from your friend chris GJDWe
Hi, I want to tell you a little more about where I live. I live in a small town in Australia, not too far from the beach. It's a very quiet town. Where do you live? What is it like over there? If I visit your hometown, what can we do together? I'm looking forward to receiving your reply. Bye! Now write an email to your friend in about 80 words. You received an email from your friend, Chris, who lives in Australia. •Where do you live? •What is it like over there? •If I visit your hometown, what can we do together?
Hi,

I want to
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town in Australia, not too far from the beach. It's a
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quiet town. Where do you
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? What is it like over there? If I visit your hometown, what can we do together?

I'm looking forward to receiving your reply.

Bye!

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write an email to your friend in about 80 words.

You received an email from your friend, Chris, who
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lives
in Australia.

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do you
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IELTS letter Email from your friend chris

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  American English
10 paragraphs
103 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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