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Ian, an old friend from your schooldays, recently prepared an evening meal for you at his home, where you also met his wife and two children. write a letter to thank him and explain why you enjoyed and suggest a meal at your home.

Ian, an old friend from your schooldays, recently prepared an evening meal for you at his home, where you also met his wife and two children. write a letter to thank him and explain why you enjoyed and suggest a meal at your home. BgyQa
Dear Ian, Hope you are doing well. I am writing to thank you for the lovely meal; we had there at your home. I thoroughly enjoyed the delicious food and warm company by you and your family. It was good meeting you after so long. The friendship we shared began from school and is still strengthening as the time passes by. It was a delight to recall those lovingly moments, remembering some old friends and sharing silly jokes with your kids that we used to tell each other during class lectures. I must say that you have brought-up your children so well. They are adorable, well –mannered kids who know how to entertain guests. The meal was super tasty, specially the kebab your wife made were finger –licking. This was indeed a wonderful evening spent with your family and I think we should spent some more quality time together. How about having dinner with me on next weekend? My wife cooks delicious Chinese food. Please accept my invitation and let me know. Regards, Rabia.
Dear Ian,

Hope you are doing well. I am writing to thank you for the lovely meal; we had there at your home. I
thoroughly
enjoyed the delicious food and warm
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company
by you and your family.

It was
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good
meeting you after
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so
long. The friendship we shared began from school and is
still
strengthening as the time passes by. It was a delight to recall those
lovingly
moments, remembering
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some
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old
friends and sharing silly jokes with your kids that we
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
used
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
each other during
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
lectures.

I
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must
say that you have brought-up your children
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
well. They are adorable,
A dash was used instead of a hyphen. Did you mean: "well-mannered".
well –mannered
kids who know how to entertain guests. The meal was super tasty,
specially
the kebab your wife made
Did you mean "where" or "we"?
were
Consider using a past participle here: "fingered".
finger
–licking.

This was
indeed
a wonderful evening spent with your family and I
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think
we should
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "spend"
spent
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
more quality time together. How about having dinner with me on
next
weekend? My wife cooks delicious Chinese food.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
accept my invitation and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know.

Regards,

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Rabia
.
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IELTS letter Ian, an old friend from your schooldays, recently prepared an evening meal for you at his home, where you also met his wife and two children. write a letter to thank him and explain why you enjoyed and suggest a meal at your home.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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