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Dear Stephanie, I am delighted to inform you that I have completed my one year successfully at my job and now I can avail my annual leaves. I was thinking what about if we could spend some time together? It has been two whole years that we haven’t met and it would be wonderful if we could spend some time together obviously if that suits you. It has been a very hectic year for all of us due to COVID emergency all around the world. The stress we all have gone through this pandemic was challenging physically as well as emotionally. As you know I work as a Clinical Pharmacist, my job had been very hectic lately in the past whole year and has really stressed me out. However, as the condition is getting better and things are under control now, we all can have some time off work to recollect ourselves. It would be wonderful to spend some time together so we can commemorate good old days. I would love to meet your new friends that you are always telling me about. I always get fascinated by the Niagara Falls. Visiting the falls together would be such fun. You can show me your city and we could do some hiking together. I always wished to go on campfires. Do let me know what you think of this idea. I am certain you would love it. I will eagerly wait for your response. Warm wishes, Rabia.
Dear Stephanie,

I
am delighted
to inform you that I have completed my one
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year
successfully
at my job and
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now
I can avail my annual
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leaves
. I was thinking what about if we could spend
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some
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time
together? It has been two whole years that we haven’t met and it would be wonderful if we could spend
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some
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time
together
obviously
if that suits you.

It has been a
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very
hectic
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year
for all of us due to
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COVID
emergency all around the world. The
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stress
we all have gone through this pandemic was challenging
physically
as well
as
emotionally
. As you know I work as a Clinical Pharmacist, my job had been
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very
hectic lately in the past whole
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year
and has
really
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stressed
me out.
However
, as the condition is getting better and things are under control
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now
, we all can have
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some
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time
off work to recollect ourselves.

It would be wonderful to spend
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some
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time
together
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so
we can commemorate
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good
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days. I would
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love
to
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meet
your new friends that you are always telling me about. I always
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get
fascinated by the Niagara Falls. Visiting the falls together would be such fun. You can
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show
me your
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city and
we could do
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some
hiking together. I always wished to go on campfires.

Do
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let
me know what you
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think
of this
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idea
. I am certain you would
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love
it. I will
eagerly
wait for your response.

Warm wishes,

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Rabia
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IELTS letter write letter to your friend to visit for a few days

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
246 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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