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You are planning to organise a party. You invite your friend.

You are planning to organise a party. You invite your friend. xg80Q

Dear Angela, I am writing to invite you and your family to our birthday party, which will be held on the 16th of August in 2021, at p. m. It is my daughter's 7 th birthday and we decided to celebrate it at a comfortable restaurant with our close relatives and old friends. The party will be decorated with different coloured flowers and ribbons. I am sorry I have not been in touch for such a long time. And this event will be a great opportunity for seeing each other. Please, bring your kids also, then my daughter will be happy. We are going to organise several interesting games and shows for them. There will be music and disco. And we have also arranged a delicious party dinner at 9 p. m. In addition to there will be cakes, an ice cream and others at the party. Anyway, do not forget to bring your children. Look forward to seeing you again. Lots of love, Tamila

Dear Angela, I am writing to invite you and your family to our birthday You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
, which will be held
 on the 16th of August in 2021, at p. m. It is my daughter's Did you mean "7th"?7th
7 th
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).birthday, and
birthday and
 we decided to celebrate it at a comfortable restaurant with our close relatives and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 friends. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 will be decorated
 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
Possible spelling mistake. 'coloured' is British English.colored
coloured
 flowers and ribbons. I am sorry I have not been in touch for such a long time. And this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 will be a great opportunity for seeing each other. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
, bring your kids also
, then my daughter will be happy. We are going to Possible spelling mistake. 'organise' is British English.organize
organise
 several interesting games and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 for them. There will be music and disco. And we have also
 arranged a delicious You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
 dinner at 9 p. m. In addition
 to there will be cakes, an ice cream This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:and many more
and others
 at the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. Anyway, do not forget to bring your children. Look forward to seeing you again. Lots of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
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Tamila