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Write a letter to your friend apologise for missing her/his party. Explain why you are missing the party.

Write a letter to your friend apologise for missing her/his party. Explain why you are missing the party. JLwqw
Dear Ann. Iam writing to apologise for missing your party. I am very sorry about it. I absolutely and I wanted to go your party. Unfortunately, I couldn't participate in that day. You know I have got a little daughter Mary. She is very young 1 years old. Additionary she is extremely naughty and capricious. If I bring her somewhere, she will be whinny and shamed me. That day nobody stayed at home with my daughter. Unfortunately, she had a few caugh. May be she drank cold water. I brang her at the doctor. The doctor wrote some medicines. And I took them and give her. She didn't want drink medicine and not to eat anything. She always cried. That's why I couldn't visit your party. I hope you will accept my apologizes. And of course I will come your birthday party. Love Lucy.
Dear Ann.
Iam
writing to
apologise
for missing your
party
. I am
very
sorry about it. I
absolutely
and I wanted to go your
party
. Unfortunately, I couldn't participate in that day. You know I have
got
a
little
daughter Mary. She is
very
young 1 years
old
.
Additionary
she is
extremely
naughty and capricious. If I bring her somewhere, she will be whinny and shamed me. That day nobody stayed at home with my daughter. Unfortunately, she had a few
caugh
.
May be
she drank
cold
water. I
brang
her at the doctor. The doctor wrote
some
medicines. And I took them and give her. She didn't want drink medicine and not to eat anything. She always cried. That's why I couldn't visit your
party
. I hope you will accept my
apologizes
. And
of course
I will
come
your birthday
party
.
Love
Lucy.
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend apologise for missing her/his party. Explain why you are missing the party.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
144 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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