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Write a letter to your friend apologise for missing her/his party. Explain why you are missing the party.

Write a letter to your friend apologise for missing her/his party. Explain why you are missing the party. JLwqw

Dear Ann. Iam writing to apologise for missing your party. I am very sorry about it. I absolutely and I wanted to go your party. Unfortunately, I couldn't participate in that day. You know I have got a little daughter Mary. She is very young 1 years old. Additionary she is extremely naughty and capricious. If I bring her somewhere, she will be whinny and shamed me. That day nobody stayed at home with my daughter. Unfortunately, she had a few caugh. May be she drank cold water. I brang her at the doctor. The doctor wrote some medicines. And I took them and give her. She didn't want drink medicine and not to eat anything. She always cried. That's why I couldn't visit your party. I hope you will accept my apologizes. And of course I will come your birthday party. Love Lucy.

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 daughter Mary. She is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
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 her at the doctor. The doctor wrote This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 medicines. And I took them and give her. She didn't want drink medicine and not to eat anything. She always cried. That's why I couldn't visit your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. I hope you will accept my Do not mix variants of the same word ('apologize' and 'apologise') within a single text.apologises
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. And of course
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come
 your birthday You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdinnercelebration
party
. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
Love
 Lucy. 