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You have received an invitation to a birthday party. Write a letter accepting the invitation and suggesting that you organise the music.

You have received an invitation to a birthday party. Write a letter accepting the invitation and suggesting that you organise the music. KWlY3
Dear Alan, Thanks for the information to your birthday party on Friday April 6th. I was really pleased to receive it and I would love to come. It is lucky for me that on the day I will be free and able to go to your party. By the way, I am going to my new flat which I bought from Tashkent last year. If I am not mistaken, you know my new flat is near your house. It has been such a long time since we have seen each other so it will be great to get together and catch up on all the news. Please let me know if there is anything I can bring or anything I can do to help. Maybe with DJ. I want to organise your party's music, if you allow. You know, the most famous DJ in our city is my close friend. Please let me know about my idea. Thanks again, and see you on the 6 th. LOVE, Angie.
Dear Alan,

Thanks for the information to your birthday party on
Commas set off the month in a weekday-month-day date: "Friday,".
Friday
April 6th. I was
really
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pleased
to receive it and I would
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love
to
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come
. It is lucky for me that on the day I will be free and able to go to your party. By the way, I am going to my new flat which I
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bought
from Tashkent last year. If I am not mistaken, you
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know
my new flat is near your
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house
.

It has been such a long time since we have
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seen
each other
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so
it will be great to
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get
together and catch up on all the news.
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Please
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let
me
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know
if there is anything I can bring or anything I can do to
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help
. Maybe with DJ. I want to
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organise
your party's music, if you
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allow
. You
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know
, the most
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famous
DJ in our city is my close friend.
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Please
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let
me
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know
about my
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idea
. Thanks again, and
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see
you on the
Did you mean "6th"?
6 th
.

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LOVE
, Angie.
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IELTS letter You have received an invitation to a birthday party. Write a letter accepting the invitation and suggesting that you organise the music.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
168 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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