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Invite a friend to the family party

Invite a friend to the family party q50QG

Dear Sardor I am writing to you to personally invite you and your family members to the party holding on Saturday, June of 30th in my apartment. As you were informed gratefully two weeks ago that we had a baby son. Therefore, I would love to share my happiness with my all closest. Besides, It would be a great opportunity to meet, chat and eat around a table simultaneously. However, you have been in the capital city on a business trip recently. I am hopefully certain that you will able to manage come back in time as soon as possible. Basically, everybody in the place we live knows that we have been close friends for several years. Thus, you are supposed to be with me in the most joyful event in my life. Initially, I planed to distribute plow (uzbek traditional food) at the beginning of the day. Then a honorable man from Islamic staff is being expected to attend so as to give a speech about Muslim duties of bringing up a child properly and so on. I am looking forward to responding my letter soon. Regards Jakhongir

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.ArdorS ardorSandor
Sardor


I am writing to you to personally
 invite you and your family members to the party holding on Saturday, June of 30th in my apartment.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 you were informed
gratefully
 two weeks ago that we had a baby son. Therefore
, I would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
 to share my happiness with my all closest. Besides
, It would be a great opportunity to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
, chat and eat around a table simultaneously
.

However
, you have been in the capital city on a business trip recently. I am hopefully
 certain that you Did you mean "will be able"?will be able
will able
 to manage This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back in time as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible.

Basically
, everybody in the place we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 knows that we have been close friends for several years. Thus
, you are supposed
 to be with me in the most joyful This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 in my life.

Initially
, I planed to distribute plow (Possible spelling mistake found.UzbekUzbeks
uzbek
 traditional food) at the beginning of the day. Then Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 honorable This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualresidentcitizen
man
 from Islamic staff is being This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to attend 'So as to' expresses purpose and is used in formal texts. Consider using "to"to
so as to
 give a speech about Muslim duties of bringing up a child properly
 and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 on.

I am looking forward to responding my letter This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Regards Possible spelling mistake found.Jahangir
Jakhongir