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A friend in abroad is visiting your country. Suggest something, offer accommodation and give direction.

A friend in abroad is visiting your country. Suggest something, offer accommodation and give direction. 2rRyX
Dear Andrew, It’s such a pleasant surprise to hear that you’re finally coming to visit my country. I'd love to make your stay in Malaysia a memorable one. First and foremost, come and stay with us! Don’t you miss my little brother, John. He's been yelling to sleep with you since he got your news. We’ll meet at the Corner Cafe. I usually hang out there on weekday afternoons and it’s a stone throw from the station. Go straight on Royal Avenue about 800m until you come to Park Road. Take the first turn on the left. It’s on your left. Easy peasy, right? I’m bringing you to our landmarks for you to get fantastic photos. There’s a great Skatepark we definitely need to go to. There is much more waiting for you to explore. We’re all eagerly waiting to see you soon. Cheers, Elaine
Dear Andrew,

It’s such a pleasant surprise to hear that you’re
finally
coming to visit my country.

I'd
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love
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
your stay in Malaysia a memorable one.
First
and foremost,
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come
and stay with us! Don’t you miss my
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little
brother, John. He's been yelling to sleep with you since he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
your news. We’ll
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meet
at the Corner
'Cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
Cafe
. I
usually
hang out there on weekday afternoons and it’s a stone throw from the station.

Go straight on Royal Avenue about
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800m
until you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to Park Road. Take the
first
turn on the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
. It’s on your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
. Easy
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peasy
, right? I’m bringing you to our landmarks for you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
fantastic photos. There’s a great
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Skatepark
we definitely need to go to. There is much more waiting for you to explore.

We’re all
eagerly
waiting to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Cheers,

Elaine
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IELTS letter A friend in abroad is visiting your country. Suggest something, offer accommodation and give direction.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
144 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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