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You are planning to make a birthday party. Invite your friend.

You are planning to make a birthday party. Invite your friend. 3xbgd

Dear Laura, I am writing to invite you and your family to our birthday that will be organised on the 16th of August, Sunday, at 9 p. m. It is my daughter's 7th birthday and we decided to celebrate it in one of the nearest restaurants near here. Several our close relatives and old friends will visit so I hope you will also be able to come. The party will be decorated with different coloured flowers and ribbons. I am sorry I have not been in touch for such a long time. And it will be a great opportunity for seeing each other. Do bring your kids also, then my daughter will be happy. We are going to organise several interesting games and shows for them. There will be music and dance at the party. And we have also arranged a delicious dinner party for the second part at 9 p. m. Besides them there will be cakes, an ice-cream and sweets for them. Anyway, do not forget to bring your kids also. Look forward to seeing you again. Lots of love, Camila.

Dear Laura, I am writing to invite you and your family to our birthday that will be Possible spelling mistake. 'organised' is British English.organized
organised
 on the 16th of August, Sunday, at 9 p. m. It is my daughter's 7th Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).birthday, and
birthday and
 we decided to celebrate it in one of the nearest restaurants near here. Several our close relatives and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 friends will visit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I hope you will also
 be able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
. The party will be decorated
 with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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coloured
 flowers and ribbons. I am sorry I have not been in touch for such a long time. And it will be a great opportunity for seeing each other. Do bring your kids also
, then my daughter will be happy. We are going to Possible spelling mistake. 'organise' is British English.organize
organise
 several interesting games and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 for them. There will be music and dance at the party. And we have also
 arranged a delicious dinner party for the second part at 9 p. m. Besides
 them there will be cakes, an ice-cream and sweets for them. Anyway, do not forget to bring your kids also
. Look forward to seeing you again. Lots of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love
, Camila. 