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Letters for Invitation for Happy birthday

Letters for Invitation for Happy birthday LlbGV
Dear Mrs Sarah I am writing to invite you and your extended family on the auspicious occasion of Birthday Ceremony of my little son. It will be held on 30 June 2021 year at Restaurant of Paykent Jilosi. This Celebration will divided into two parts Which is held at the beginning of the day at 7 a. m and its continuation will be organised in the evening after it is half to seven. Namely, First part of Birthday is planned for inviting only men, this is called Pilov Table in due to fact that Our mentality request us to do like this order. After finishing morning ceremony, All entertaining performances will occured at our Happy Night party for Everybody who are our best and closest guests and friends. But these are not all of them. Futhermore The most pleasure and funny thing is devoted to my honney Son and little friends in this Night. Please inform us your presence in advance till on the 30 th September by keep in touching us 99 478 98 374. It would be great to meet with you and Your family in so enjoyable Celebration of Happy Birthday. Thanks a bunchAnn Parkinson
Dear Mrs Sarah I am writing to invite you and your extended family on the auspicious occasion of Birthday Ceremony of my
little
son. It will
be held
on 30 June 2021 year at Restaurant of
Paykent
Jilosi
. This Celebration will
divided
into two parts Which
is held
at the beginning of the day at 7 a. m and its continuation will be
organised
in the evening after it is half to seven.
Namely
,
First
part of Birthday
is planned
for inviting
only
men
, this
is called
Pilov
Table in due to fact that Our mentality request us to do like this order. After finishing morning ceremony, All entertaining performances will
occured
at our Happy Night party for Everybody who are our best and closest guests and friends.
But
these are not all of them.
Futhermore
The most pleasure and
funny
thing
is devoted
to my
honney
Son and
little
friends in this Night.
Please
inform us your presence in advance till on the
30 th
September by
keep
in touching us 99 478 98 374. It would be great to
meet
with you and Your family in
so
enjoyable Celebration of Happy Birthday. Thanks a
bunchAnn
Parkinson
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  American English
1 paragraphs
197 words
5.5
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