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You are planning to invite company manager to your seminar. Write a letter to company manager

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Dear Sir I cordially invite you to our seminar for our company. You can invite your colleagues because this is depend on your career at work such as progress company budget and support well idea and design. I am writing letter only you from your company because of you are manager from your company and I believe sure you tell it to your boss and stuffs. This seminar will be beneficial for everyone because many young students give their strong design and older businessmen or managers give their suggestions and questions to it. Since students need to protect their idea. Before begin the seminar will be funny and enjoyable party such as talking, dances and other. Since maybe someone late to the party or want improve their mood. This seminar make strong our connections with each other. We would be grateful if you could come seminar and you will support our decision. Thank you for read and write answer for this letter. Your sincerely Jaloliddin

Dear Sir

I cordially
 invite you to our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforumdiscussionround tableworkshopconventionsymposium
seminar
 for our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
. You can invite your colleagues This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 this is Consider using a past participle here: "depended".depended
depend
 on your career at work such as progress You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 budget and support well This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 and design.

I am writing letter This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 you from your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of you are manager from your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
company
 and I believe sure you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 it to your boss and stuffs. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforumdiscussionround tableworkshopconventionsymposium
seminar
 will be beneficial for everyone This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 young students give their strong design and older businessmen or managers give their suggestions and questions to it. “Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since
 students need to protect their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
Before
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforumdiscussionround tableworkshopconventionsymposium
seminar
 will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:amusinghumorous
funny
 and enjoyable party such as talking, dances and other. Since maybe someone late to the party or want This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 their mood. This You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforumdiscussionround tableworkshopconventionsymposium
seminar
Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: "makes".makes
make
 strong our connections with each other.

We would be grateful if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withforumdiscussionround tableworkshopconventionsymposium
seminar
 and you will support our decision. Thank you for read and write answer for this letter.

Your sincerely


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Jaloliddin