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Write an informal letter to your friend describing a product that you bought recently

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Dear May How are you? I hope that you’re in the pink of health. I am wirting this letter to share good news with you. I recently bought a very unique wall clock. I've been using it for a week and it's amazing that I decided to buy it. I bought this watch at a local festival held where people sell homemade items. The watch is quite heavy because it is made of wood, it is randomly paired with pieces of wood that are shaped together that look funny, on it are engraved stylized Roman numbers. The wall clock works very well no noise. It makes my room unique. Since it's homemade, I think it's a one-of-a-kind piece. However, it's not that expensive so I saved some money on decorating my room. I hope you can come over so you can see my new wall clock. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Lots of love Phuong

Dear May

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good
 news with you. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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bought
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very unique
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I
've been using it for a week and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withattractivenessallureappealinterest
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buy
 it.

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I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
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people
 sell homemade items. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 is quite heavy This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is made
 of wood, it is randomly
 paired with pieces of wood that are shaped
 together that look This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:amusinghumorous
funny
, on it are engraved
 stylized Roman numbers. The wall clock works This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well no noise. It This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 my room unique.

Since You use this word too often, consider replacing it withattractivenessallureappealinterest
it's
 homemade, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withattractivenessallureappealinterest
it's
 a one-of-a-kind piece. However
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withattractivenessallureappealinterest
it's
 not that expensive This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I saved This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 money on decorating my room. I hope you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 over This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 you can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 my new wall clock.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Lots of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :admireadore
love


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IELTS letter Write an informal letter to your friend describing a product that you bought recently

Letter

American English

5 paragraphs

157 words

6.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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