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Letter for renting a car for a holiday

Letter for renting a car for a holiday NlBam
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to request you to arrange a rental car for me for my upcoming holiday next month. I will be visiting Agra with my family for 4 days and will be staying at Ramada Hotel from 01 to 04 November. I am looking for a medium-size vehicle as I will be travelling with my entire family which includes my husband, parents and 2 children. As I will be travelling through air, I would like you to send your driver at the airport from where he can pick us. My flight number is 02 and arrival time is 9 am. I can drop the driver at your office where I can fill the documents if required. I understand that you charge $100 as a daily rent, however, please let me know if you have any offers if I will book the car in advance for my stay. I would look forward to your response as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Sam
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to request you to arrange a rental car for me for my upcoming holiday
next
month.

I will be visiting Agra with my family for 4 days and will be staying at Ramada Hotel from 01 to 04 November.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking for a medium-size vehicle as I will be travelling with my entire family which includes my husband, parents and 2 children.

As I will be travelling through air, I would like you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
your driver at the airport from where he can pick us. My flight number is 02 and arrival time is 9 am. I can drop the driver at your office where I can fill the documents if required.

I understand that you charge $100 as a daily rent,
however
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know if you have any offers if I will book the car in advance for my stay.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
would look forward to your response as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as possible.

Yours
faithfully
,

Sam
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IELTS letter Letter for renting a car for a holiday

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
167 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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