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Refusing invitation letter.

Refusing invitation letter. m3pe8
Dear Jamol, Thanks for the invitation of your birthday party. Unfortunately, I won't be able to make it as it is my close friend's birthday on that day and she is having a small family party to celebrate. She is 22 years old and it is the most amazing party which I will have been. It is such a pity because we haven't seen each other for ages. You must give me a call so I can arrange to get another time instead. Perhaps I will throw a party on New Year's Eve so I can see everyone. Thanks for the invitation and hope the party goes well. Love, Dreamflower.
Dear
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Jamol
,

Thanks for the invitation of your birthday party.

Unfortunately, I won't be able to
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make
it as it is my close friend's birthday on that
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day and
she is having a
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small
family
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party
to celebrate. She is 22 years
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old
and it is the most amazing
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party
which I will have been.

It is such a pity
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because
we haven't
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seen
each other for ages. You
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must
give me a call
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so
I can arrange to
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get
another time
instead
.

Perhaps I will throw a
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party
on New Year's Eve
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so
I can
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see
everyone.

Thanks for the invitation and hope the
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party
goes well.

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Love
,

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Dreamflower
.
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IELTS letter Refusing invitation letter.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
110 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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