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You are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noises may disturb your neibour.

You are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noises may disturb your neibour. bDDeY
Dear Miss Edison Hi, My name is Mahatma, your new neighbour. Our house is located in the east of your house. I see you every morning when you are going to your work, and I am very pleased to have such neighbours like you. I am writing this letter to tell you that next week I am going to be married, and me and my wife decided to hold a party in our new house. It's going to be started from 8 p. m to 12 a. m. also, we have invited our friends whom are not more that 50 individual. We have so intent for our wedding party. Thus, we have some plans for our after party. They would be movies, video games and some dancing plans. We know that we are going to make noises and it may disturb you. We want to say thanks in advance for your understanding. It is our pleasure to have you in our wedding party next week, and you can come with your partner if you like. I will send you our wedding card for more information. Warm regards, Nicholas Tesla
Dear Miss Edison

Hi,

My name is Mahatma, your new
neighbour
. Our
house
is located
in the east of your
house
.

I
see
you every morning when you are going to your work, and I am
very
pleased
to have such
neighbours
like you.

I am writing this letter to
tell
you that
next
week I am going to
be married
, and me and my wife decided to hold a
party
in our new
house
.

It's going to be
started
from 8 p. m to 12 a. m.
also
, we have invited our friends whom are not more that 50 individual.

We have
so
intent for our wedding
party
.
Thus
, we have
some
plans for our after
party
. They would be movies, video games and
some
dancing plans.

We know that we are going to
make
noises and it may disturb you.

We want to say thanks in advance for your understanding.

It is our pleasure to have you in our wedding
party
next
week, and you can
come
with your partner if you like.

I will
send
you our wedding card for more information.

Warm regards,

Nicholas Tesla
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IELTS letter You are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noises may disturb your neibour.

Letter
  American English
13 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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