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Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the position of English language instructor in your Language Center which was advertised in Wednesday's edition of The News. I believe that I am good employee for your centre. I am 30 years old and an English teacher. I graduated from the University of Andijan in the direction of English in 2012. Prior to this I had been working an English teacher at School 37 in Uchkuprik district since nine years. I am a hard-worker, responsible, educated and experienced. I could talk to young pupils easily and could speak English and Russian. I will be very happy if you could give in opportunity to work in your place. Thanks you very much and I shall wait for your response. Yours faithfully, Alice Springs.

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 and could speak English and Russian. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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 much and I shall wait for your response. Yours faithfully
, Alice Springs. 

IELTS letter Write a letter about application

Letter

American English

1 paragraphs

131 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 5.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.0

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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