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Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the position of English language instructor in your Language Center which was advertised in Wednesday's edition of The News. I believe that I am good employee for your centre. I am 30 years old and an English teacher. I graduated from the University of Andijan in the direction of English in 2012. Prior to this I had been working an English teacher at School 37 in Uchkuprik district since nine years. I am a hard-worker, responsible, educated and experienced. I could talk to young pupils easily and could speak English and Russian. I will be very happy if you could give in opportunity to work in your place. Thanks you very much and I shall wait for your response. Yours faithfully, Alice Springs.
Dear Sir, I am writing to apply for the position of English language instructor in your Language Center which
was advertised
in Wednesday's edition of The News. I believe that I am
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good
employee for your
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centre
. I am 30 years
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old
and an English teacher.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
graduated from the University of
Possible spelling mistake found.
Andijan
in the direction of English in 2012. Prior to this I had been working an English teacher at School 37 in
Possible spelling mistake found.
Uchkuprik
district
Did you mean "for"? ('since' refers to a point in time, whereas 'for' refers to a period)
since
nine years. I am a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
-worker, responsible, educated and experienced. I could talk to young pupils
easily
and could speak English and Russian.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
will be
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very
happy if you could give in opportunity to work in your place.
Did you mean "Thank you"?
Thanks you
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very
much and I shall wait for your response. Yours
faithfully
, Alice Springs.
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IELTS letter Write a letter about application

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
131 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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