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You are planning to go on holidays in an English speaking country where one of your friend resides. Please write him a letter and let him know about your upcoming trip

You are planning to go on holidays in an English speaking country where one of your friend resides. Please write him a letter and let him know about your upcoming trip EwJgq

Dear Sam, Hope to find this letter to you and your family in good health. I am writing this letter to inform you that I got visitor visa of Canada, so I am coming next week to meet you. I know, you are living in Canada from last two year, so you may be familiar with popular places, please suggest me to some places to visit. Sam, I am little bit worried about my residence, so can you recommend me a hotel where I can stay for my holidays. Would you able to take some days off from your work, so we can spend time quality time together. I have to plan to go on beaches and do some water activities and a lot of shopping. Waiting for your reply. Yours faithfully, Veerpal Kaur

Dear Sam,

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good
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got
 visitor visa of Canada, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
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 week to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 you.

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please
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some
 places to visit. Sam, I am Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".littlebit
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so
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you
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some
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so
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have to
 plan to go on beaches and do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 water activities and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 shopping.

Waiting for your reply. Yours faithfully
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