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you are planning to go and to study overseas. ask your friend about their courses.

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Dear Jane, How are you? Hope you are enjoying a fine summer. I've heard. That's great! I have a real desire to go and study English and computer science at a school overseas. First of all, finding out about courses. Such points are interested me, how much the courses cost and when they start. Could you tell me also vital informations about the school. ? You know, that I have been working at school as an English teacher. I want to improve my numerous knowledge skills in my professional atmosphere which are a fundament for my successfully future development. In addition, I have a nuclear family because of this, I may never be sent there alone. Furthermore, I would be grateful if you could give me further details about accomodation. Enclosingly, I have number of problems with my health, blood pressure. It required me diet and peace of mind. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. Best wishes, Lola
Dear Jane, How are you? Hope you are enjoying a fine summer. I've heard. That's great! I have a real desire to go and study English and computer science at a school overseas.
First of all
, finding out about courses. Such points
are interested
me, how much the courses cost and when they
start
. Could you
tell
me
also
vital
informations
about the school. ? You know, that I have been working at school as an English teacher. I want to
improve
my numerous knowledge
skills
in my professional atmosphere which are a fundament for my
successfully
future development.
In addition
, I have a nuclear family
because of this
, I may never be
sent
there alone.
Furthermore
, I would be grateful if you could give me
further
details
about
accomodation
.
Enclosingly
, I have number of problems with my health, blood pressure. It required me diet and peace of mind. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. Best wishes,
Lola
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IELTS letter you are planning to go and to study overseas. ask your friend about their courses.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
162 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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