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you are planning to go and to study overseas. ask your friend about their courses.

you are planning to go and to study overseas. ask your friend about their courses. d57LE

Dear Jane, How are you? Hope you are enjoying a fine summer. I've heard. That's great! I have a real desire to go and study English and computer science at a school overseas. First of all, finding out about courses. Such points are interested me, how much the courses cost and when they start. Could you tell me also vital informations about the school. ? You know, that I have been working at school as an English teacher. I want to improve my numerous knowledge skills in my professional atmosphere which are a fundament for my successfully future development. In addition, I have a nuclear family because of this, I may never be sent there alone. Furthermore, I would be grateful if you could give me further details about accomodation. Enclosingly, I have number of problems with my health, blood pressure. It required me diet and peace of mind. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future. Best wishes, Lola

Dear Jane, How are you? Hope you are enjoying a fine summer. I've heard. That's great! I have a real desire to go and study English and computer science at a school overseas. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
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 me, how much the courses cost and when they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
. Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me also
 vital The word 'informations' is a legal term. In standard English, the word 'information' is a non-count noun. Did you mean "information"?information
informations
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improve
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skills
 in my professional atmosphere which are a fundament for my successfully
 future development. In addition
, I have a nuclear family because of this
, I may never be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 there alone. Furthermore
, I would be grateful if you could give me further
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details
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accomodation
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