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Write a letter Asking for advice from someone about something

Write a letter Asking for advice from someone about something 6NG8x
Dear sir I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice about to improve my skills. My name is Teddy Bear and I have been working as a English teacher for 2 years. You know responsibility of English teachers is increasing in these days. In this case I must study hard on my knowledge. Mostly I seeked a tutor who can give me essential advise according to my issue and I saw results of your students in your telegram channel. In addition, my degree is B2, I can easily do tasks which belong this degree. However it would be great if you would like to give me some advice about improving my language skills. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice according to this point. I looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfullyTeddy Bear.
Dear sir I would appreciate it if you could
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some
advice about to
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my
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. My name is Teddy Bear and I have been working as
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English teacher for 2 years. You know responsibility of English teachers is increasing in these days.
In this case
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must
study
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hard
on my knowledge.
Mostly
I
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seeked
a tutor who can
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
give
me essential advise according to my issue and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
results of your students in your telegram channel.
In addition
, my degree is B2, I can
easily
do tasks which belong this degree.
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However
it would be great if you would like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
give
me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
advice about improving my language
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. I would appreciate it if you could
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
give
me
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
advice according to this point.
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I looking
forward to hearing from you
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soon
. Yours
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faithfullyTeddy
Bear.
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IELTS letter Write a letter Asking for advice from someone about something

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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