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Write a letter to your friend giving advice about your course at university

Write a letter to your friend giving advice about your course at university d57P7
Dear Nicole, I'm just writing to let you know that I'm really happy that you decided to study Nursing at the Federal University of Ceará (UFC). I'm sure you'll love it and learn a lot during your time there. In addition, I'm more than happy to help you in anything that you want. First of all, it's a 5 years course, therefore, you'll need organization and determination to finish it; however, you'll not regret it. Additionally, during the first two years the subjects you'll take are mainly theoretical and in the other three years you'll start practice. About UFC, I strongly recommend it. It's an amazing University with highly capable professors. It's not easy to get in it, however, it's the best one in our state. My main tip about how to prepare to the application is to study hard. You'll need to study the whole year nonstop. Also, if you can pay, a preparation course would be really helpful. Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Good luck! All the best Herta
Dear Nicole,

I'm
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just
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let
you know that I'm
really
happy that you decided to study Nursing at the Federal University of Ceará (UFC). I'm sure
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you'll
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love
it and learn a lot during your time there.
In addition
, I'm more than happy to
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help
you in anything that you want.

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First of all
,
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it's
a 5 years course,
therefore
,
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you'll
need organization and determination to finish it;
however
,
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you'll
not regret it.
Additionally
, during the
first
two years the subjects
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you'll
take are
mainly
theoretical and in the other three years
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you'll
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start
practice.

About UFC, I
strongly
recommend it.
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It's
an amazing University with
highly
capable professors.
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It's
not easy to
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get
in it,
however
,
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it's
the best one in our state.

My main tip about how to prepare to the application is to study
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hard
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
You'll
need to study the whole
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year
nonstop.
Also
, if you can pay, a preparation course would be
really
helpful.

Looking forward to hearing from you
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soon
.
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Good
luck!

All the best

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Herta
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend giving advice about your course at university

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
172 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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