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Write a letter to the director of an educational center in an English-speaking country. Ask some advice about studying at the center.

Write a letter to the director of an educational center in an English-speaking country. Ask some advice about studying at the center. QVyDK
Dear Sir/Madame I would like to study at your center. So I need some information about the center facilities. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice study at your center. My plan from my childhood is studying aproad in order to encourage my English skills, such as writing and speaking. I am quite sure yuor advice is more useful for me than searching from the Internet. Could you give me some information about your center achievement? If I have the chance of studying in your courses where can I live? Would you mind giving me important details providing with accomodation? In addition to, I should have only certain foods, in order to improve my health. Morever, I have a bit problems with my health, so I need only dietary foods. Please send me a detailed reply about the center. Thank you for taking the time to read this letter. Please feel free to contact me with my number. My contact details can be found at the end of this letter. Yours faithfully Jane Marvel
Dear Sir/Madame I would like to study at your center.
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So
I need
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some
information about the center facilities. I would appreciate it if you could give me
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some
advice study at your center. My plan from my childhood is studying
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aproad
in order to encourage my English
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skills
, such as writing and speaking. I am quite sure
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yuor
advice is more useful for me than searching from the Internet. Could you give me
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some
information about your center achievement? If I have the chance of studying in your courses where can I
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live
? Would you mind giving me
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important
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details
providing with
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accomodation
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to, I should have
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only
certain foods, in order to
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improve
my health.
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Morever
, I have a
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bit
problems with my health,
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so
I need
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only
dietary foods.
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Please
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send
me a detailed reply about the center. Thank you for taking the time to read this letter.
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Please
feel free to contact me with my number. My contact
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details
can
be found
at the
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end
of this letter. Yours
faithfully
Jane
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Marvel
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the director of an educational center in an English-speaking country. Ask some advice about studying at the center.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
177 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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