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Write a letter to the director of an educational center in an English-speaking country. Ask some advice about studying at the center.

Write a letter to the director of an educational center in an English-speaking country. Ask some advice about studying at the center. QVyDK

Dear Sir/Madame I would like to study at your center. So I need some information about the center facilities. I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice study at your center. My plan from my childhood is studying aproad in order to encourage my English skills, such as writing and speaking. I am quite sure yuor advice is more useful for me than searching from the Internet. Could you give me some information about your center achievement? If I have the chance of studying in your courses where can I live? Would you mind giving me important details providing with accomodation? In addition to, I should have only certain foods, in order to improve my health. Morever, I have a bit problems with my health, so I need only dietary foods. Please send me a detailed reply about the center. Thank you for taking the time to read this letter. Please feel free to contact me with my number. My contact details can be found at the end of this letter. Yours faithfully Jane Marvel

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 information about your center achievement? If I have the chance of studying in your courses where can I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
? Would you mind giving me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
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details
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improve
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 problems with my health, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
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only
 dietary foods. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
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send
 me a detailed reply about the center. Thank you for taking the time to read this letter. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
 feel free to contact me with my number. My contact This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 can be found
 at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of this letter. Yours faithfully
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