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write a letter to friend for saying thank you for the time spent in holidays. when you got home you realized you had left your wallet there

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Hi Swati I hope you are doing well! I am writing this letter to say Thank you. It was great spending time with you. I never felt so happy in my life and those holidays give me so many memorable moments in my life. I never forget that special moments spent with you throughout life. Swati, one thing more, Maybe I have left my wallet in the room I stayed. Actually, my wallet was missing and I have all credit cards, Pan card, adhar cards, etc in that. you can check in a drawer next to the bed. Maybe I left there. If you find it please courier me through speed post so that it can be reached to me within 2 days. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Thanks Sanchit
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Swati


I hope you are doing well!

I am writing this letter to say Thank you. It was great spending time with you. I never felt
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happy in my life and those holidays give me
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so
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memorable moments in my life. I never forget that special moments spent with you throughout life.

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Swati
, one thing more, Maybe I have
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my wallet in the room I stayed. Actually, my wallet was missing and I have all credit cards, Pan card,
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adhar
cards, etc in that.
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you
can
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check
in a drawer
next
to the bed. Maybe I
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left
there.

If you find it
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please
courier me through speed post
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so
that it can
be reached
to me within 2 days.

I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Thanks

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Sanchit

IELTS letter write a letter to friend for saying thank you for the time spent in holidays. when you got home you realized you had left your wallet there

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
132 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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