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You are planning to go and study English at school overseas. You should ask advice

You are planning to go and study English at school overseas. You should ask advice JlA8B
Dear SirI would appreciate it if you could give me some advice about studying abroad for learning English language. As you know, nowadays acquiring foreign language is the most essential aspect of achieving goals. I have been learning English language at our local educational centre by comprehensive approch for 2 years. However, I mean it is not enough for getting good results. Therefore, I would like to more practice at abroad during the conversation with native speakers. Please, inform me such kind of course at school overseas an their requerments. In addition, it would be better if I live in house with English family, which makes prosses improvements of my knowledge. You are one person whom I can rely on a perfect choice. Please, help me take this significant decision of my life. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Your faithfully, Anna Taylor
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advice about studying abroad for learning English language. As you know, nowadays acquiring foreign language is the most essential aspect of achieving goals. I have been learning English language at our local educational
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centre
by comprehensive
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approch
for 2 years.
However
, I mean it is not
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enough
for getting
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good
results.
Therefore
, I would like to more practice at abroad during the conversation with native speakers.
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Please
, inform me such kind
of course
at school overseas
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an their requerments
.
In addition
, it would be better if I
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live
in
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house
with English family, which
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makes
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prosses
improvements of my knowledge. You are one person whom I can rely on a perfect choice.
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Please
,
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help
me take this significant decision of my life. I look forward to hearing from you
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soon
.
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Your
faithfully
, Anna
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Taylor
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IELTS letter You are planning to go and study English at school overseas. You should ask advice

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  American English
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