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Letter to insurance company

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Respected Sir, I have planned a holiday the previous week but I had a really bad trip as I lost my luggage while transiting through multiple airports, It was mentioned on my travel itinerary that I will receive my luggage at my final destination which I did not receive. I am writing to you in regards to my lost luggage, my luggage included some of my important documents, a brand new cinema player, a few antiques which included paintings that I bought from Italy on my holiday trip. The total worth of the lost items including all other stuff was approximately USD1200. My holiday trip was divided into 5 location of which the last location was Toronto, while boarding the flight from London which was the 4th location planned as per my trip my travel itinerary was changed as the airline decided to accommodate passengers in a smaller flight due business reasons, I was told that I would receive my luggage through a different flight at the destination which never reached me and that created a panic to me. I see that I have a cover of USD2000 on my travel insurance package, I request you mail me the list of necessary documents required to process the claim. Thanks and Regards

Respected Sir,

I have planned a holiday the previous week This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I had a really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
 as I lost my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbaggageparaphernaliageartrunk
luggage
 while transiting through multiple airports, It was mentioned
 on my travel itinerary that I will receive my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbaggageparaphernaliageartrunk
luggage
 at my final destination which I did not receive.

I am writing to you Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".in regard towith regard toregarding
in regards to
 my lost You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbaggageparaphernaliageartrunk
luggage
, my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbaggageparaphernaliageartrunk
luggage
 included This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 of my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 documents, a 'brand new' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "brand-new".brand-new
brand new
 cinema player, a few antiques which included paintings that I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 from Italy on my holiday You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
. The total worth of the lost items including all other stuff was approximately USD1200.

My holiday You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
was divided
 into 5 location of which the last location was Toronto, while boarding the flight from London which was the 4th location planned as per my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrekrunexpeditionoutingswingtour
trip
 my travel itinerary was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 as the airline decided to accommodate passengers in a smaller flight due business reasons, I was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informed
told
 that I would receive my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbaggageparaphernaliageartrunk
luggage
 through a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 flight at the destination which never reached me and that created a panic to me.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that I have a cover of USD2000 on my travel insurance package, I request you mail me the list of necessary documents required to process the claim.

Thanks and Regards