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Letter to insurance company

Letter to insurance company RkgJp
Respected Sir, I have planned a holiday the previous week but I had a really bad trip as I lost my luggage while transiting through multiple airports, It was mentioned on my travel itinerary that I will receive my luggage at my final destination which I did not receive. I am writing to you in regards to my lost luggage, my luggage included some of my important documents, a brand new cinema player, a few antiques which included paintings that I bought from Italy on my holiday trip. The total worth of the lost items including all other stuff was approximately USD1200. My holiday trip was divided into 5 location of which the last location was Toronto, while boarding the flight from London which was the 4th location planned as per my trip my travel itinerary was changed as the airline decided to accommodate passengers in a smaller flight due business reasons, I was told that I would receive my luggage through a different flight at the destination which never reached me and that created a panic to me. I see that I have a cover of USD2000 on my travel insurance package, I request you mail me the list of necessary documents required to process the claim. Thanks and Regards
Respected Sir,

I have planned a holiday the previous week
but
I had a
really
bad
trip
as I lost my
luggage
while transiting through multiple airports, It
was mentioned
on my travel itinerary that I will receive my
luggage
at my final destination which I did not receive.

I am writing to you
in regards to
my lost
luggage
, my
luggage
included
some
of my
important
documents, a
brand new
cinema player, a few antiques which included paintings that I
bought
from Italy on my holiday
trip
. The total worth of the lost items including all other stuff was approximately USD1200.

My holiday
trip
was divided
into 5 location of which the last location was Toronto, while boarding the flight from London which was the 4th location planned as per my
trip
my travel itinerary was
changed
as the airline decided to accommodate passengers in a smaller flight due business reasons, I was
told
that I would receive my
luggage
through a
different
flight at the destination which never reached me and that created a panic to me.

I
see
that I have a cover of USD2000 on my travel insurance package, I request you mail me the list of necessary documents required to process the claim.

Thanks and Regards
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IELTS letter Letter to insurance company

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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