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You are planned to have a wedding party write a letter to your friend

You are planned to have a wedding party write a letter to your friend Mr0Wk

Dear Kate, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to invite you and your family for my son's wedding day to make the party fun and memorable. The avenue of the party is our home and the party will start at 8 p. m on 1 st of December. It has been really long, we have not to met for celebrate any ceremony together, therefore I planned to make this wedding party special for us. I will make arrangements for drinks, starters and a big cake. I am including some our national meals on the menu. I am also planned cutting a wedding cake ceremony with romantic music for a young couple and dance on our favourite tracks to make this party a supper for every one. I am supper excited for this party as well of my friends and relatives will be there with me after ages. So girl get ready for the bash. . . Put on your party clothes and be ready for greeting with my course mates. So I am looking for your confirmation and please do not disappoint me. I hope the party will be the best for me with you. Best regards, Marry Ray.

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