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train service in your area is reduced. Write a letter to your train company.

train service in your area is reduced. Write a letter to your train company. 73dJ5
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to face inconvenience from you train service. In our area there were many train comes on time and before there were two times at Bandra to Surat but, suddenly it decrease the facility from your side. Nowadays, our local public are very disappointed from your routine services, that in the current time only one train is to come forwards the Bandra to Surat. Consequently, our areas population are mostly travel to in the bus. Which is not convenient for them. So they don't arrived at their work on time and it effected on their budget also. In the fact, people faced the lot of affects on their Income and their business too. We shall appreciate, if your service are opened on before timing and we have request you to increase the facility of your train services in our area because of that we doing our work on time. I look forward to your possitive response. Yours faithfully, Namrata Sonani.
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to face inconvenience from you
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train
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service
. In our area there were
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many
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train
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comes
on
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time
and
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before
there were two
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times
at
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Bandra
to Surat
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but
,
suddenly
it
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decrease
the facility from your side.

Nowadays, our local public are
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very
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disappointed from
your routine
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services
, that in the
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current
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time
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only
one
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train
is to
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come
forwards the
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Bandra
to Surat.
Consequently
, our areas population are
mostly
travel to in the bus. Which is not convenient for them.
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So
they don't arrived at their work on
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time
and it effected on their budget
also
. In the fact,
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people
faced the lot of affects on their Income and their business too.

We shall appreciate, if your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
service
are opened
on
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before
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
timing and
we have request you to increase the facility of your
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train
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services
in our area
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because
of that
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we doing
our work on time.

I look forward to your
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possitive
response.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Namrata
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Sonani
.

IELTS letter train service in your area is reduced. Write a letter to your train company.

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  American English
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166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
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