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you are planing a special party and want some help from your friend

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Hi there, How are you lately? I hope you are well. Do you remember the girl I told you I met a couple months ago? I'm supposed to organize a quinceanera for her, it has to be in a few weeks but I might need help with it so I though you will be the best in organizing this. I already have booked a banquet hall and the decorations are going to be placed by us a day before the party. Can you ask your mum if she could help us with the traditional food as she is half Mexican she might know something more than us. I really need your help with the music playlist I know you choose the best songs. I have a class so I've got to go but think about it and tell me. I'm meeting with the girl on Saturday to look for her dress come by to meet her. Best wishes, valando
Hi there, How are you lately? I hope you are well. Do you remember the girl I
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told
you I met a
Did you mean "couple of"? (In formal written English 'of' should follow 'couple'.)
couple
months ago? I'm supposed to organize a
'quinceanera' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "quinceañera"
quinceanera
for her, it
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has to
be in a few weeks
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but
I might need
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help
with it
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so
I
Did you mean "thought"?
though
you will be the best in organizing this.

I already have booked a banquet hall and the decorations are going to
be placed
by us a day
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before
the party. Can you ask your mum if she could
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help
us with the traditional food as she is half Mexican she might know something more than us. I
really
need your
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help
with the music playlist I know you choose the best songs.

I have a
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class
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so
I've
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got
to go
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but
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think
about it and
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tell
me.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
'm meeting with the girl on Saturday to look for her dress
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come
by to
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meet
her. Best wishes,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
valando
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IELTS letter you are planing a special party and want some help from your friend

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
158 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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