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tourist destination in vietnam

tourist destination in vietnam L3J63
Hi everyone. Today, i will introduce to everyone the most beautifuk tourist destination in VN. And it’s sapa that is known as real life heaven of VN, sapa is mountainous distric of lao cai province. Sapa is famous for many natural sightseeing places with hills and green forests like silver waterfall, ham rong moutain, fansipang mountain, muong hoa valley and soon. And the most prominent attraction in the area around sapa is fansipang which is highest mountain in VN. Sapa weather experiences 4 season is one day: spring in the morning, summer at noon, autubn in the afternoon ang the cold of winter at night. Sapa is also known as the kingdoom of colorful flower species which can’t bbe found any where eles in our country. Besides, sapa is well known for its cultural diversity in a combination of many ethnic minority group’s culture as: hmong, dao, tay, giay, … people to sapa will actually have opportunities to dicover the unique customs start your journey to discover this fantastic area
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