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Read this email from your English-speaking college classmate Alex and the notes you have made.

Read this email from your English-speaking college classmate Alex and the notes you have made. 70Dj2
Hi, How have you been, Alex? I would love to read your email. I am so excited to work together on the college science presentation. “The rainforest “is such a great topic to come up with. But it isn't the best. How about ‘’ The climate change phenomenon’’? Will our presentation be greater when we choose it as our topic? And I’m so sorry that I can start our presentation tomorrow. I’m going to have a dentist appointment tomorrow. My teeth hurt so I have to go there. If you want to prepare the presentation, we may go to the coffee on the street corner. Here is quiet enough to start. And we can drink something there if you want. And the other reason that I chose this place, there are many trees and flowers here, and the coffee’s owner is very knowledgeable about global phenomena so we can consult him. Wouldn't it be great to have new ideas for the presentation? As I know, the presentation is going to take place on Friday this week, isn’t it? I think we should give it in the morning. This is the greatest time to talk about that. And you, how do you think? Let me know soon, Lyn
Hi,

How have you been, Alex? I would
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love
to read your email. I am
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so
excited to work together on the college science presentation.

“The rainforest “is such a great topic to
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come
up with.
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But
it isn't the best. How about ‘’ The climate
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change
phenomenon’’? Will our
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presentation
be greater when we choose it as our topic?

And I’m
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so
sorry that I can
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start
our
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presentation
tomorrow. I’m going to have a dentist appointment tomorrow. My teeth hurt
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so
I
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have to
go there.

If you want to prepare the
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presentation
, we may go to the coffee on the street corner. Here is quiet
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
enough
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
. And we can drink something there if you want. And the other reason that I chose this place, there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
trees and flowers here, and the coffee’s owner is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
knowledgeable about global phenomena
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
we can consult him. Wouldn't it be great to have new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
for the presentation?

As I know, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
presentation
is going to take place on Friday this week, isn’t it? I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
we should give it in the morning. This is the greatest time to talk about that. And you, how do you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
?

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Let
me know
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soon
,

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Lyn
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IELTS letter Read this email from your English-speaking college classmate Alex and the notes you have made.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
206 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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