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give opinion to newspaper about the town centers

give opinion to newspaper about the town centers xxoYy
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Fatmagul. I was born and raised in Duzce. I have read an article in your newspaper. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the article which is related to the town center in my country. From my point of view, I do not completely agree with the similarities of all the town centers. To begin with, I would like to say that there are some points about the all town center’s similarities. Their park design and historical architecture-style buildings are the same. To give an illustration all buildings have the same size windows and the parks have identical plants. In the other words, it is worth bearing in mind that my hometown has spectacular nature, you have never seen it before anywhere. Moreover, the traditional festivals allow people to show their skills and intelligence. If you record a movie about my hometown you can come here. I am more willing to help you with this situation. Please let me know If you have any questions regarding any of the above. Yours sincerely Fatmagul
Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is
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Fatmagul
. I
was born
and raised in
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Duzce
. I have read an article in your newspaper.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the article which
is related
to the town center in my country. From my point of view, I do not completely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with the similarities of all the town centers.

To
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begin
with, I would like to say that there are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
points about the all town center’s similarities. Their park design and historical architecture-style buildings are the same. To give an illustration all buildings have the same size windows and the parks have identical plants.

In the other words, it is worth bearing in mind that my hometown has spectacular nature, you have never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
it
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
anywhere.
Moreover
, the traditional festivals
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allow
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people
to
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show
their
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skills
and intelligence.

“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
you record a movie about my hometown you can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
here. I am more willing to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you with this situation.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know If you have any questions regarding any of the above.

Yours
sincerely


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Fatmagul
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IELTS letter give opinion to newspaper about the town centers

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  American English
7 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
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