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Explanation letter. You are going to explain why you cancelled wedding ceremony to your boss.

Explanation letter. You are going to explain why you cancelled wedding ceremony to your boss. 70DNk
Dear Sirs, I am writting to explain my situation which was happened in September. As you know, I was going to marry to Sevara whom my parents engaged us few months ago. Everything was organised well. When I arrived at my hometown, I was informed that my groom's grandfather got sick with coronavirus which caused to postpone some seremonies to next several days. I didn't know what to do while my parents were busy with wedding preparations. I tried to put up with accidents and hoped for the better. Unfortunately, the situations went worth day by day. Under these cucumstances we decided to break our relationships before we get married.
Dear Sirs, I am
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writting
to
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explain
my situation which
was happened
in September. As you know, I was going to marry to
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Sevara
whom my parents engaged us few months ago. Everything was
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organised
well. When I arrived at my hometown, I
was informed
that my groom's grandfather
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
sick with coronavirus which caused to postpone
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some
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seremonies
to
next
several days. I didn't know what to do while my parents were busy with wedding preparations. I tried to put up with accidents and hoped for the better. Unfortunately, the situations went worth day by day. Under these
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cucumstances
we decided to break our relationships
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before
we
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get
married.
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IELTS letter Explanation letter. You are going to explain why you cancelled wedding ceremony to your boss.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
110 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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