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What is you look like? Introduce yourself

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Hi I ‘m Mohammad my full name is Mohammad mehraban lahijani. I ‘m in my thirty. I com from a big family, there are seven person in my us family. I have four siblings that three brothers and one sister. All my siblings got married but I ‘m single. I live whit my parents at home. My mother is housewife and my father is retired. I have two nephews and one nieces. I ‘m P. E teacher in school and I go to school every day until noon. I have part job in furniture company, we make all kind of sofa and every thing for home decorating. My height is about 180 cm and my weigh is about 90 kg. I thinking I ‘m a little over weight. I have short black hair and I have black eyes. I have brown skin. Many gays say that you are baby face and you seem younger than your age. I ‘m introvert and serious, I prefer to talk less. I ‘m not good sense of humor, I think I ‘m a little shy. I ‘m so kind and in help everybody if I can. I was professional athlete and I did taekwondo. I got gold medal from Asian championships in 2005. I go to gym three days a week, I like badminton and volleyball. The other my hobby is fishing I usually go to lake or dam for hunting fish. I watch tv and cheek social media in my free time. I sometime go to movies with my friends. I like war film and documentary film.
Hi

I ‘m Mohammad my full name is Mohammad
mehraban
lahijani
. I ‘m in my thirty. I com from a
big
family, there are seven
person
in my us family.
I
have four siblings that three brothers and one sister. All my siblings
got
married
but
I ‘m single. I
live
whit my parents at home. My mother is housewife and my father
is retired
. I have two nephews and one nieces.

I ‘m P. E teacher in school and I go to school every day until noon.
I
have part job in furniture
company
, we
make
all kind of sofa and every thing for home decorating.

My height is about 180 cm and my weigh is about 90 kg.
I thinking
I ‘m a
little
over weight. I have short black hair and I have black eyes.
I
have brown skin.

Many
gays say that you are baby face and you seem younger than your age.

I ‘m introvert and serious, I prefer to talk less. I ‘m not
good
sense of humor, I
think
I ‘m a
little
shy.
I
‘m
so
kind and in
help
everybody if I can.

I
was professional
athlete and I did taekwondo.
I
got
gold medal from Asian championships in 2005.

I
go to gym three days a week, I like badminton and volleyball.

The other my hobby is fishing I
usually
go to lake or dam for hunting fish.

I
watch
tv
and cheek social media in my free time. I sometime go to movies with my friends.
I
like war film and documentary film.
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IELTS letter What is you look like? Introduce yourself

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
264 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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